Second Draft of Film Trailer Plan

shot 1: both characters stepping into shower, low angle shot.
shot 2: alice wiping steam from shower door.
shot 3: in shower, both characters.
shot 4: establishing central protagonist and setting: school.
shot 5: over the shoulder/pan shot of alice seeing Maggie with brad in car.
shot 6: car back window shot showing car driving away from brad and Maggie.
shot 7: dismemberment shot.
shot 8: shot of Maggie and alice on a bed.
shot 9: 2 girls kissing alice cheek with sound bridge.
shot 10: high angle and bridge shot of alice and Maggie.
shot 11: shot reverse shot of alices face illuminated by laptop screen and then whats on the laptop screen.
shot 12: either shot reverse shot or breaking 180 degree rule while alice and maggie are arguing.
shot 13: close up shot of the computer screen and  alice scrolling through social media comments.
shot 14: alice and Maggie in the shower.
shot 15: shot of the 2 together continued from either shot 5 or 6.
shot 16: alice scrolling through social media comments again.
shot 17: alice and Maggie on a bed.
shot 18: continued shower shot.
shot 19: sound bridge 'all has changed since loving you'
shot 20: title: 'Loving You'.